Here, once again, are some more mistakes (mostly grammar).
In the
XP 105 Review there are quite a few errors
- Larami rated the XP 105s nozzle at 1X, but, I measured (etc.). There shouldnt be a comma after the but there.
- (the 105 is the only blaster with the riot blaster feature in its chain). The its should be an its.
- it shoots over 45 feet at full pressure, and isn't some wimpy little stream. There shouldnt be a comma before the and.
- But, the nozzle (etc.). There should not be a comma after the but.
-Another mistake is in the same sentence when it says happened to mine, (etc.). No comma after mine.
- This is a great water gun, with a large tank (etc.) in the 1st sentence. There shouldnt be a comma after gun.
-This blaster is a good back-up weapon, and in the day, was quite powerful. There shouldnt be commas in this sentence.
- If you added a belt clip to this weapon, it would be tremendous. Shouldnt be a comma.
In the
XP 220 Review review there are some mistakes
-Also, the pump is red and bright, so it can also be seen easily. Shouldnt be a comma.
-When you are refilling, you are really weak (etc.). There shouldnt be a comma.
- I have left, and the cap (etc.). There shouldnt be a comma
- Over all this would make a good side arm. It should be Overall.
- For scouting, I would use the XP 240, though. There shouldnt be any commas.
- But, they are wrong. There should not be a comma.
- The XP 220 can be used as a side arm, and is quite good at it. Should be no comma.
Error in
SC Power Pak Review
-The shot time with the 3x nozzle is just amazing, and it's (etc.). There shouldnt be a comma.
Errors in
ZX 1000 Review
-In the pros section: Great power for it's size. Should say its.
-This soaker is probably the soaker that is most worth it's money, because of it large reservoir and almost 5X nozzle. 3 mistakes total in this sentence.
1. Should be its not its
2. No comma
3. It should say its large reservoir instead of it.
-water will shoot towards you thought the small holes (etc.). Should say through not thought
-is when you keep pumping until the entier pump shaft is full of water (etc.). Should say entire.
- like epoxy or Elmers Glue (etc.). Should say Elmers Glue.
- In the pros section: Lightweight for it's capacity. Should say its not its
One mistake in
CPS 2700 Review
- When you add it all up, the 2700 isn't so bad afterall. Afterall is two words.